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under the picture of my smile by ~Anaely:iconAnaely:



i feel wind playing with my hair
   s till remember how you weren't there
   t rying so hard to see your face in my mind
   i know you're gone, and i am left behind
   l ost in my dreams, want to forget the past
   l onely and scared, i knew it'll never last
      l oveless, so broken, i have to awake
      o n my heart you left a mark of something so fake
      v oices in my head tell me i should carry on
      e verything i see, though, makes me feel so wrong
          y ou never loved me, and i know now you never will
          o cean of pain sweeps me away every moment still
          u nder the picture of my smile...
©2006-2009 ~Anaely
:iconanaely:

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...a weird thought that came a cross my mind...ignore...

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:iconfat-luie:
WOW!!! i LOVE it!!!!
loved the idia of the " i love you" on the side...:D
FAV!!!

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:heart: I love u!:heart:
Inyë vanda mel oialë. Elyë i minenya. elwennya-lya. Eyë mernë parmatémalya meldanya. inyë méla tye.
:iconanaely:
thank you1 thank you! :bow:

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:heart: Eli
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if i promise not to kill you, can i have a hug?...
:iconmotherducky:
:jawdrop: OMG I LOVE IT!

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I'm the new C*A*N*C*E*R never looked b/e/t/t/e/r and you can't stand it
:iconfat-luie:
u're welcome

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:heart: I love u!:heart:
Inyë vanda mel oialë. Elyë i minenya. elwennya-lya. Eyë mernë parmatémalya meldanya. inyë méla tye.
:icondeaths-craddle:
you did an awesome job :-). I know just how you feel. I am going thro that pain right now.

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"Anyone who says sunshine is pure happiness has never danced in the rain. "
:iconleppaboy:
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Great concept and great writing!
I luv it!
And I luv U! :)

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:coke: :excited: :coke:
:iconanaely:
thanks...:blashes:

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:heart: Eli
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if i promise not to kill you, can i have a hug?...
:iconanaely:
:heart:...thanks love...

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:heart: Eli
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if i promise not to kill you, can i have a hug?...
:iconmotherducky:
anytime!

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I'm the new C*A*N*C*E*R never looked b/e/t/t/e/r and you can't stand it

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